I'm sure we all heard of the saying "what's done in the dark will come to light" I have to say I practically live by the saying. Too many times, people do things that they know will have a terrible out come if they do it, but choose to do so anyway. BUT WHY? Is it the idea of being found out? Is it the thrill of taking a bite of the forbidden fruit of deception? I tend to be a pretty blunt person. I feel personally it takes way too much time to sneak around and do things in secret.
Ahhh, I have the perfect example of this. Today a girl, I kind of knew was exposed on a social networking site. Apparently, the story goes she and this guy went out for a while in high school. i guess it was good for minuet and then they broke up. For the narrative sake, we'll call the Guy B and the girl G. So after B and G broke up, B started dating this other girl and got her pregnant. Of course G was hurt by this because she was still in love with B. Supposedly they both agreed on a "mutual" breakup..but as the script said "when a heart break it don't break even" so of course it was him who called for the break. moving along..they continue to mess around throughout high school even though he had a girlfriend. Anyway the B and the girl break up and G thinks that maybe there is hope for them to get back together (but we all know how that goes) they continue to mess around with her thinking they're getting back together, when in reality all he really was doing was getting free nuts out of her. So recently I've discovered that he has another girlfriend that is away at college! while she's there hes out here sowing his wild oats..haha men, I tell you. so G is still messing with him, getting jealous when he talks to other girls..I originally thought that she didn't know about the girl but SHE DID! So for five years she's been messing with this scum bag of a guy while passing out judgments on other lives!
Well I guess today she pissed off the right person because she was exposed so hard in twitter, I felt her shame through my phone! I wonder how long she thought she could go on and do this fooling around without being caught? Then meanwhile, the guy is laughing and adding to the comments like he wasn't just doing the do's with her! In general guys, all I'm saying is stuff like that can't stay hidden for long. The shadows go away at some point and the light exposes you for who you really are..I wonder what happened to the days when honesty actually mattered ? Needless to say and as always whats done in the dark will come to the light..remember that.
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Very true, lies will be discover sooner or later. This was a very not shocking story, I know couple of people who cheat left and right, they eventually get caught and the sad part is that the girls still choose to stay with them. I don't know why but they do, anyway good job on this. I really like all the details you chose to make for the story. Strong words, and it had a good flow.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really intriguing post, very truthful. You used some words that made me laugh a little. I like the length of this particular one, some other ones are a little lengthy. There are quite a few grammatical errors, you should just proofread a little more. Otherwise, overall your writing is really great to read.
ReplyDeleteThe fact that you are uncut and raw with the story kept me glued to the screen as I read it. You vividly painted a story that all of us are familiar with. Some of the material you could have broken into separate paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteThe personal experience Nadeen uses in her writing is very effective. It helps the reader to become "in tune" to the topic and the subject, and helps the reader understand the entire aspect of the situation. Instead of using names, the boy was B and the girl was G. This helps keep identities hidden, but it is still easy to read and understand. It is not confusing when understand what B did or who G is while reading it. Nadeen has a simple writing style, which isn't a bad thing (I am the same way). This is beneficial because anybody can understand the concept you are writing about. Keep it up, you're a good writer.
ReplyDeleteI love that you aren't afraid to speak your mind here. You're touching on a situation that I think a lot of people have found themselves in at some point in life, which really helps to drive your message home. Some parts of this entry are a little difficult to follow though. I would suggest maybe using names for these people, as well as checking your grammar and sentence structure.
ReplyDeleteThe way you wrote this gave me a sense of your emotions and made me want to read more. Although I do not like the fact that you made guys seem all the same, you were expressing your emotions and unafraid to speak your mind; which I applaud. I like the way that you used one quote which is "what's done in the dark will come to light". That one quote pretty much summed up the whole story.
ReplyDeleteTheir were some grammatical errors. I suggest you reread your blogs and proofread to make your blog stronger. Overall, this blog is a good blog about letting out your emotions and speaking what is on your mind. Keep up the good work!